Jane’s story is rapidly morphing into a story about more than just her romance with Major Tom Stafford. The Rothwells intrigue me. There are long passages of the book dealing with the relationship between Robert and Edward (always fun to write) and the relationship between Jane and Harriet. Still, it is basically a romance and that will come through. This is the most challenging book to write because there is an arc with Jane’s story and her brother Robert’s. Charlotte and Will must eventually appear. It will be interesting to see what they ‘tell’ me to write when that time comes!